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You need more dialoge during the sex because all you mainly did was describe it, your next story needs to have more dialoge during sex.«12345» 59 comments«12345»anonymous readerReport 2013-10-15 22:40:51good story but needs more storylineanonymous readerReport 2012-06-27 03:03:06hmmmmmmmm too bad you didn’t get to fuck her more. . Free porn . . . … the experience would have done you good LOLAnonymous readerReport 2008-12-19 10:39:59Good story.OrtsmaReport 2008-12-05 01:15:07″Never saw her again…”? What kind of shit is that? the experience would have done you good LOLAnonymous readerReport 2008-12-19 10:39:59Good story.OrtsmaReport 2008-12-05 01:15:07″Never saw her again…”? Con’s:
You need more dialoge during the sex because all you mainly did was describe it, your next story needs to have more dialoge during sex.«12345» Con’s:
You need more dialoge during the sex because all you mainly did was describe it, your next story needs to have more dialoge during
