thanks for this story. This was your third story in a row I’ve read and I’m exausted !! Porn For me I’d have it not in flashback, would be my suggestion. Love the relentless pace :)anonymous readerReport 2013-05-31 04:39:37fucking hot. WOW ! Well written too.anonymous readerReport 2013-05-31 03:30:18I wouldn’t mind seeing some dialogue, but otherwise good story.anonymous readerReport 2013-05-30 14:44:14I’m completely wiped out. Maybe a few more paras. Maybe a few more paras. Well written too.anonymous readerReport 2013-05-31 03:30:18I wouldn’t mind seeing some dialogue, but otherwise good story.anonymous readerReport 2013-05-30 14:44:14I’m completely wiped out. For me I’d have it not in flashback, would be my suggestion. Love the relentless pace :)anonymous readerReport 2013-05-31 04:39:37fucking hot.
