I also agree with wordytom… 3 comments«1»aceofhartsReport 2008-10-27 07:55:27Excellent story!!!!! Pornhat Don’t be clever until you first become a writer. I also agree with wordytom… i was definatly captured all the way to the end. Though i did get lost a few times along the way i believe this was to do with the lack of detail and description of there settings. The “D” was pure hoke. Though i did get lost a few times along the way i believe this was to do with the lack of detail and description of there settings. Why not try to tell a straight story that starts at the beginning and stops at the end? Though i did get lost a few times along the way i believe this was to do with the lack
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