Please break it down into readable sections so I may enjoy reading it again. Xxx video So negative vote instantly.anonymous readerReport 2013-06-15 00:33:53paragraphs?? Please break it down into readable sections so I may enjoy reading it again. Maybe labeling it “Proof read & Sectoined” Again thanks for a great story.anonymous readerReport 2013-06-15 12:53:55Perhaps a geography lesson is necessary here. What are they teaching kids these days?anonymous readerReport 2013-06-15 02:21:21I really liked the story, but the other commenters notes about the solid wall of text is quite true. What are they teaching kids these days?anonymous readerReport 2013-06-15 02:21:21I really liked the story, but the other commenters notes about the solid wall of text is quite true. 5 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2013-06-16 12:25:16Very hard to read clumped together as it is BUT a great story.
