This isn’t unusual and believe me, a good editor would very definitely, turn your story into more than you would think possible. I don’t mean just RUN spell check, I mean re-read your story **Several Times** before posting. Porn Paragraphs provide a mental and (more importantly) visual break. …not to mention it’s bad form to write a story that’s all one paragraph. Paragraphs provide a mental and (more importantly) visual break. …not to mention it’s bad form to write a story that’s all one paragraph. Finally SPELL CHECK. The first reader prety much says it all. But when there are no breaks between thoughts it makes it especially hard. I stopped reading after the 22nd line or so. You have a LOT of mistakes.
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Samantha Bentley / Tanner Mayes
