My qualm is that it’s possible to make a story interesting in the matter in which the person taking in the story becomes aware of what they already knew, where each aspect of the story was cleverly hinted beforehand. The story drags you in and makes you care for the characters
well done saya.anonymous readerReport 2011-04-11 01:27:43ok you got me to cry, i loved it!«1234» 18 comments«1234»anonymous readerReport 2013-08-25 20:17:13dude. Sex video … This isn’t a very large set of possibilities, but it’s one that I think keeps your ideas of suspense and surprise from being universal, surprise in particular.BelthasarReport 2011-06-07 23:53:50I read this story in a doujin before…scotsmitch2001Report 2011-05-26 04:24:21Different from what I usually read and i am glad i have. The story drags you in and makes you care for the characters
well done saya.anonymous readerReport 2011-04-11 01:27:43ok
