25 comments«12345»anonymous readerReport 2011-11-08 21:14:18written in what sounds like ghetto language what with all the missing words and other screwups. Porn video Did you sleep all through English 101 or what?Anonymous readerReport 2008-10-15 23:57:34k its a fuckin sex story… SHOW SOME PRIDE IN YOUR WORK AND A WHOLE LOT OF RESPECT FOR THE READERS AND ALWAYS USE A GOOD EDITOR BEFORE POSTING EITHER DO IT RIGHT OR NOT AT ALL.Anonymous readerReport 2009-06-14 12:50:19Reads like some Aussie half-assed, but it was still a good romp. SHOW SOME PRIDE IN YOUR WORK AND A WHOLE LOT OF RESPECT FOR THE READERS AND ALWAYS USE A GOOD EDITOR BEFORE POSTING EITHER DO IT RIGHT OR NOT AT ALL.Anonymous readerReport 2009-06-14 12:50:19Reads like some Aussie half-assed, but it was still a good romp.
