I am not going to sugar coat it; your storytelling ability is horrendous. Secondly, why would someone who prays be on this site? Pornhat Anyway, I really liked your story. You’re a fucked up person! I guess I just read your stories because you seem to have great ideas, but you just lack the skill at getting them down. I guess a neutral vote is in order because, like I said before, you have great ideas; you just need to tell them better.anonymous readerReport 2011-07-05 20:21:01First of all, this isn’t true. However, the beginning was strong but then on the end with the sex, you totally let us down. I am not going to tell you how you should write, but please check your work before posting.
