Keep writing!READERReport 2007-05-02 19:26:55I dunno, i liked the 3 first parts but expected more from it,
looks like the ending is written by some1 else then the first 3,
or in an urge to finnish but you could have made a book of itREADERReport 2007-04-29 05:58:33Well written, but too short! Pornhat but i liked the third one best«1» 5 comments«1»READERReport 2007-05-06 05:18:55Ending 3 made me wet! 5 comments«1»READERReport 2007-05-06 05:18:55Ending 3 made me wet! Needs more sex!READERReport 2007-04-26 16:08:37You are a fucking moron. but i liked the third one best«1» but i liked the third one best«1» Keep writing!READERReport 2007-05-02 19:26:55I dunno, i liked the 3 first parts but expected more from it,
looks like the ending is written by some1 else then the first 3,
or in an urge to finnish but you could have made a book of itREADERReport 2007-04-29
