and you should know that every time the person talking is switched a new paragraph starts…anonymous readerReport 2010-11-03 02:40:50It is a good storty but I agree with the other comments. Pornhat Perhaps you could add a little it more detail to the sex parts of the story, telling more of how she sucked his cock and more about how he entered her cunt and licked her juices up and how the two orgasamed, shooting their respect cum down each others throats.Anonymous readerReport 2009-10-27 22:19:56I think it was a good story.. Thanks.«12» Thanks.«12» 7 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2014-09-14 01:45:59i loved it cant wait for part 2anonymous readerReport 2011-04-08 21:00:15too short!!!! But short… But short… It was a little short and needs to be a little bit longer.
