makes me almost feel like i was there.«12» I wish I was that big.READERReport 2006-08-02 21:05:03so many problems. XXX first paragraph, you state “we” were getting ready. I wish I was that big.READERReport 2006-08-02 21:05:03so many problems. reads like you are a guy trying to write female. you and who? do you have multiple personalities? I wish I was that big.READERReport 2006-08-02 21:05:03so many problems. first paragraph, you state “we” were getting ready. who? 3/10 — a point because you did write a story, a point because it was readable, and a point because it flows well.READERReport 2006-08-02 12:29:45very good. 3/10 — a point because you did write a story, a point because it was readable, and a point because it flows well.READERReport 2006-08-02 12:29:45very good. 3/10 — a point because you did write a story,
