The story plot is interesting, but all the misspellings and wrong use of words was so distracting that I didn’t bother to finish the story. XXX Examples: then instead of than (they actually have different meanings); “grab my hand” instead of “grabbed my hand”; “pushes me gentle back” should be “pushes me gently back”. You’ll be fine.anonymous readerReport 2011-03-05 12:51:53very niceeeee.plz continueanonymous readerReport 2011-03-05 12:38:57PLEASE follow the advice of senorlongo. The story plot is interesting, but all the misspellings and wrong use of words was so distracting that I didn’t bother to finish the story. 7 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2011-03-19 14:41:38I’ll agree with the fact that your grammar effected your story. Good Luck. I usually spend 25% writing and 75% editting.
