I do think that the girl broke a little too easy. XXX 1 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2009-05-25 02:05:54Its a great story. Terrificly written. Looking forward to seeing many more from you.«1» 1 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2009-05-25 02:05:54Its a great story. Very few spelling and punctuation errors. Just my oppinion but something you may consider in future stories yes? Looking forward to seeing many more from you.«1» Just my oppinion but something you may consider in future stories yes? Looking forward to seeing many more from you.«1» Looking forward to seeing many more from you.«1» However. Just my oppinion but something you may consider in future stories yes? Looking forward to seeing many more from you.«1» Very few spelling and punctuation errors.
