3 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2012-02-14 01:18:28good work. XXX I shall keep reading your seriesanonymous readerReport 2011-11-29 04:43:45Great story, really enjoying the series. one small critique. 3 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2012-02-14 01:18:28good work. one small critique. I shall keep reading your seriesanonymous readerReport 2011-11-29 04:43:45Great story, really enjoying the series. Might be just me tho!anonymous readerReport 2011-11-29 00:40:03ANOTHER GREAT PART WELL WRITTI=EN AND THE STORY IS SOGOOD KEEP THE SERIES GOING
;; JJ«1» 3 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2012-02-14 01:18:28good work. I like a story that explains the whole picture, so leaving out big details like this lessens the experience for me. My one wish would be for you to stop ending words with an apostrophe, but write either for example hearin or hearing. 🙂
With the effort it takes to add the ‘ it makes it just too deliberate, for me.
