anyways good story i really liked it there r some grammer mistakes but i coudent find many but 10/10redoctReport 2009-09-07 22:10:25Baloney! Your grammar, spelling, lack of proper capitalazation puts you at about the 6th grade level.«1234» You claim to be 30 but have no idea how to write. Xxx video Your grammar, spelling, lack of proper capitalazation puts you at about the 6th grade level.«1234» anyways good story i really liked it there r some grammer mistakes but i coudent find many but 10/10redoctReport 2009-09-07 22:10:25Baloney! 17 comments«1234»Anonymous readerReport 2014-12-16 13:32:21Boring u can’t spell she shit and piss on u that is gross and u clean her ass oooo my god your mouth is going to be smelling bad story REWRITEanonymous readerReport 2012-07-02 17:09:13nice apart from the shit and piss fuckanonymous readerReport 2012-06-25 14:36:05this story was ok
