Build up the story a lot more, create foreplay, make details, etc. Porn Build up the story a lot more, create foreplay, make details, etc. She’s way too full of herself. …and ‘Cum on my PRETTY face? . . …I gave it a thumbs down. …anonymous readerReport 2013-03-29 04:19:37I liked the story, however, as a writer, there are some things I want to point out for you to improve upon. I’m looking forward to seeing your work again :)«123» To start, the tab key exists for a reason. 🙂 I liked it, it is rushed.anonymous readerReport 2013-03-29 14:32:38I really didn’t care for the ‘Rose’ character in this story. I find it hard to believe you would be satisfied with this story if you reread it yourself.
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