9 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2012-06-03 10:39:03Poor story with no plot or characterisationmtnguy70Report 2011-02-17 02:20:23Nice story, but too many commas, and they weren’t usually in the correct places. Thanks for enough imaginative input to get me hard though! Porn Thanks for enough imaginative input to get me hard though! also..whose kyle?Anonymous readerReport 2009-05-22 07:11:34Fake fake fake. 9 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2012-06-03 10:39:03Poor story with no plot or characterisationmtnguy70Report 2011-02-17 02:20:23Nice story, but too many commas, and they weren’t usually in the correct places. Actually have sex before you write a story!«12» Thanks for enough imaginative input to get me hard though! also..whose kyle?Anonymous readerReport 2009-05-22 07:11:34Fake fake fake. also..whose kyle?Anonymous readerReport 2009-05-22 07:11:34Fake fake fake. Work on that and other technical details, and you’ll do well. U need to put more detailAnonymous readerReport 2009-01-14 21:06:20There is no god damn pop in a
