i fully intend to try again soon, though probably with a diferent plotAnonymous readerReport 2009-08-16 14:32:52to short. 9 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2012-07-22 09:04:25Keep up the good work!her_master_tigReport 2009-08-28 20:15:33First question, You stat4ed he was “He was also completely naked” and yet right after that you stated “Then he tore open his trousers …” watch your writing.Anonymous readerReport 2009-08-26 22:09:09I like it…please continue, but for future reference, make it longer. Pornhat i fully intend to try again soon, though probably with a diferent plotAnonymous readerReport 2009-08-16 14:32:52to short. 9 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2012-07-22 09:04:25Keep up the good work!her_master_tigReport 2009-08-28 20:15:33First question, You stat4ed he was “He was also completely naked” and yet right after that you stated “Then he tore open his trousers …” watch your writing.Anonymous readerReport 2009-08-26 22:09:09I like it…please continue, but for future reference, make it longer.
