or, can we have a rematch, pretty please?READERReport 2009-07-15 18:43:13Good story, but could have used more fleshing out and definition.«1» or, can we have a rematch, pretty please?READERReport 2009-07-15 18:43:13Good story, but could have used more fleshing out and definition.«1» or, can we have a rematch, pretty please?READERReport 2009-07-15 18:43:13Good story, but could have used more fleshing out and definition.«1» or, can we have a rematch, pretty please?READERReport 2009-07-15 18:43:13Good story, but could have used more fleshing out and definition.«1» My only criticism is that I would love more description of what the girls look like and their outfits, and more detail about what they are doing to each other. XXX I’ve only just found your story, and wish I had before – this plays right into my hottest fantasies (as you’ll see from my
