It’s my first story so gettinng used to the writing portion. Free porn Just a little harder to do proof reads when you’re on a kindle touch.anonymous readerReport 2013-05-21 11:46:07It really needs a rewrite. Take it to the final phase and then end it. 5 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-05-25 10:35:10A Great story Thanks for posting.anonymous readerReport 2013-05-21 12:07:00Where to start ?? SLO DOWN, take it easy and start over. It’s my first story so gettinng used to the writing portion. Keep going just slow down.«1» Your doing fine, don’t give up. Just a little harder to do proof reads when you’re on a kindle touch.anonymous readerReport 2013-05-21 11:46:07It really needs a rewrite. 5 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-05-25 10:35:10A Great story Thanks for posting.anonymous readerReport 2013-05-21 12:07:00Where to start ?? SLO DOWN, take it easy and start over. It’s my first
