Grammar Nazi.anonymous readerReport 2011-11-12 21:34:08needs a rewrite and a good editor way to many STUPID ERRORS that you should have caught IF YOU HAD PROOFREAD THIS which you obviously didn’t.anonymous readerReport 2011-06-18 12:36:52A few spelling and basic grammar errors, but much more importantly, it flowed, and the plot was amazing, so yes, another part would be advisable.anonymous readerReport 2011-06-14 08:19:50yes another part is in order«12345» So don’t be an asshole and actually give the guy credit. So don’t be an asshole and actually give the guy credit. Pornhat Grammar Nazi.anonymous readerReport 2011-11-12 21:34:08needs a rewrite and a good editor way to many STUPID ERRORS that you should have caught IF YOU HAD PROOFREAD THIS which you obviously didn’t.anonymous readerReport 2011-06-18 12:36:52A few spelling and basic grammar errors, but much more importantly, it flowed, and the plot
