I couldn’t get past the first couple paragraphs – as nothing made any sense. Please, if you’re going to write trash, let us know in the Intro. XXX Please, if you’re going to write trash, let us know in the Intro. If so, sorry – go somewhere else. I couldn’t get past the first couple paragraphs – as nothing made any sense. If so, sorry – go somewhere else. goodbyeBig Willy.Report 2010-05-18 18:48:19More a stream of wank fantasies for yourself, than a coherent story, but at least the spelling and vocabulary were reasonable. I detected a sense of humour here, why not go along that rout next time, bizarre comedy can be great, check out Monty Python.Anonymous readerReport 2010-05-15 12:05:44HOW CAN A PARKING LOT BE SEXY?!Anonymous readerReport 2010-05-12 15:31:36This story is brilliant and silly.
