no more incest… Make the switches new chapters or something.Anonymous readerReport 2008-08-05 03:09:55no no no no… Pornhat Just work on making the stories longer and making the transitions make more sense. no more incest… the first chapter was good.. you have less and less gay sex…Anonymous readerReport 2008-06-23 16:33:42okay. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . … Make the switches new chapters or something.Anonymous readerReport 2008-08-05 03:09:55no no no no… Just work on making the stories longer and making the transitions make more sense. the first chapter was good.. Just work on making the stories longer and making the transitions make more sense. the first chapter was good.. You need more segues between events.«1» you have less and less gay sex…Anonymous readerReport 2008-06-23 16:33:42okay. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . …
