granted, i do have a fair bit, but im just wide.cajunReport 2009-08-06 07:51:21Put a chapter 2 to it and give more details and then you may have something going. But other then that this story is lame.«12» I suggest you write by planning story using a story board to outline the flow, then filling in sections, finally editing for consistency, grammar and spelling
1/10 for story, + 2/10 for potential, + 1/10 for your audacity to publishJAMES ROTHERYReport 2011-06-06 17:09:40fucking shit this story is not incest its fucking lameAnonymous readerReport 2009-08-16 01:20:18i dont get it is this a joke. Porn It had it’s chances: foot slipping off calf, causing your crutch pushing into her face; her reaching up to steady you but grabbing package (with or without hubby’s comments); wife suggestively asking hubby to “turn
